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You're the only one who cannot see,
This burning need inside.
This desperate want, this massive love,
I'm always forced to hide.

I want so much to tell you,
Just how you make me feel.
But I'll never have the courage,
To break this vocal seal.

You make me so confused,
So happy, so sad, insane.
And yet you never see,
The extent of all my pain.

I know its not your fault,
It's mine and mine alone.
I'm the one who fell in love,
The fault is all my own.

So I guess this is a plea,
Because you make my brain so hazy.
I need a break from all this hurt,
So please, stop making me crazy.
Eh, I guess I was trying to show how crazy mixed messages can really make a person. I think I failed, this is crap, lol.

Lemmee Know what you think anyway.

Lesbians!

I thankyou in advance for all faves made!

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:iconred-lilly:
wow amazing~! i think this speaks to everyone who has ever had a secret crush
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:iconarcherofthedark:
Aye, that was my aim. I'm very glad you liked and thankyou for faving ^^
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:iconred-lilly:
np hun i simply love ur work^^
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:iconslimjim123:
you did everything but fail this is amazingly well written and it's beautiful too :hug:
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:iconarcherofthedark:
Thankyou! I really didn't want to fail, lol. Thankyou muchly for faving again!
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:iconslimjim123:
again, you are greatly welcome ^^
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xxcheesexgeniusxx Feb 2, 2011  Student Filmographer
:D i like this one! funnily "call it off" by tegan and sara started playing on my ipod while i was reading it XD it fits rathere well with the poem i think X3
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:iconarcherofthedark:
Ah, I just listened to it and it does kinda fit, yeah, lol. Glad you enjoyed another and thanks for faving ^^
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xxcheesexgeniusxx Feb 2, 2011  Student Filmographer
haha you're welcome :3keep up the good work as always~
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:iconkassylee:
I like this one! Very good... Really great rhyming too... :)
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