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You're the only one who cannot see,
This burning need inside.
This desperate want, this massive love,
I'm always forced to hide.

I want so much to tell you,
Just how you make me feel.
But I'll never have the courage,
To break this vocal seal.

You make me so confused,
So happy, so sad, insane.
And yet you never see,
The extent of all my pain.

I know its not your fault,
It's mine and mine alone.
I'm the one who fell in love,
The fault is all my own.

So I guess this is a plea,
Because you make my brain so hazy.
I need a break from all this hurt,
So please, stop making me crazy.
Eh, I guess I was trying to show how crazy mixed messages can really make a person. I think I failed, this is crap, lol.

Lemmee Know what you think anyway.

Lesbians!

I thankyou in advance for all faves made!

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Red-Lilly Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
wow amazing~! i think this speaks to everyone who has ever had a secret crush
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ArcheroftheDark Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011
Aye, that was my aim. I'm very glad you liked and thankyou for faving ^^
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Red-Lilly Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
np hun i simply love ur work^^
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slimjim123 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
you did everything but fail this is amazingly well written and it's beautiful too :hug:
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ArcheroftheDark Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
Thankyou! I really didn't want to fail, lol. Thankyou muchly for faving again!
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slimjim123 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
again, you are greatly welcome ^^
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xxcheesexgeniusxx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Filmographer
:D i like this one! funnily "call it off" by tegan and sara started playing on my ipod while i was reading it XD it fits rathere well with the poem i think X3
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ArcheroftheDark Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Ah, I just listened to it and it does kinda fit, yeah, lol. Glad you enjoyed another and thanks for faving ^^
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xxcheesexgeniusxx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Filmographer
haha you're welcome :3keep up the good work as always~
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kassylee Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
I like this one! Very good... Really great rhyming too... :)
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